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The suicider

March 31st, 2011 by Rocky90

You laugh and you smile
just like everyone else
You talk and you hush
You play games and have fun
You hang out with your friends
But noone knows…
You are the walking dead
You try to hide your empty eyes
Cause they strike fear in their hearts
You walk and you sit
But you are always floating somehow

Noone suspects the grim reality
burried underneath your pleasing words
only when you are alone
you let the truth speak in red
you are the talking dead

mute is your real mouth
your heart caved in
silenced you stand
in the face of incomprehensible horror
as frozen eyes gaze in the shower
The living death is
a contradiction you are trying to correct
Just as logic suggests
So you plan to conclude
this paradox spiral
that can’t be true

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23 Responses to “The suicider”

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  1. blackqwert 6:09 pm on March 31st, 2011

    Rocky So why you fucked for?
    Rocky got his ass kicked got back up

  2. Rocky90 6:17 pm on March 31st, 2011

    whats wrong with you, honey?

  3. life sucks thin u die 6:18 pm on March 31st, 2011

    rocky don’t take it personal its his way of giving advice

  4. blackqwert 6:21 pm on March 31st, 2011

    Honey? What.
    Suck’s your normal ok.

  5. life sucks thin u die 6:23 pm on March 31st, 2011

    push i am dorky normal that shits over rated idk what ur talking about

  6. blackqwert 6:28 pm on March 31st, 2011

    Dork’s can be hot. Anyway suck’s stop your bictch in.
    you can be hot. Ok im not hittin on you. Cuttin bullshit.
    I have seeen you.

  7. life sucks thin u die 6:32 pm on March 31st, 2011

    haha i know u have seen me
    and bitchen O_o
    i have seen u too idk why u dont have a gf

  8. blackqwert 6:34 pm on March 31st, 2011

    I did

  9. life sucks thin u die 6:36 pm on March 31st, 2011

    well get a new one
    there a lonely girl out there that need you to hug

  10. nikki123 7:09 pm on March 31st, 2011

    I want to see you guys:D

  11. life sucks thin u die 7:12 pm on March 31st, 2011

    lol your so cute
    how r u on here
    wont u get in trouble

  12. nikki123 7:14 pm on March 31st, 2011

    Nooooo;) my mom gave me an iPod and she thought I didn’t have Internet but I fixed it:D

  13. life sucks thin u die 7:16 pm on March 31st, 2011

    haha i was like that too
    when i had to give my laptop up

  14. nikki123 7:17 pm on March 31st, 2011

    You ya should send me a pic to my email;D
    Oh my goooooshhhb you said I’m cute:)

  15. life sucks thin u die 7:23 pm on March 31st, 2011

    lol a pic of what

  16. nikki123 7:24 pm on March 31st, 2011

    Youuuuuuu and blackquart…I think I slept it wrong oooops sorry:(

  17. life sucks thin u die 7:25 pm on March 31st, 2011

    i dont have a pic of him
    and i can send a pic of me

  18. nikki123 7:28 pm on March 31st, 2011

    Yay! Hey your a girl right? I forget easy sorry! And bi gay straight? Sorry you don’t have to answer.

  19. life sucks thin u die 7:29 pm on March 31st, 2011

    wtf u would txt me
    really ummm i am amber

    sorry if that sounded mean

  20. nikki123 7:31 pm on March 31st, 2011

    Sorry!!!!I forgot your screen name! IM SO SORRY:(

  21. life sucks thin u die 7:33 pm on March 31st, 2011

    lol its ok

  22. nikki123 7:35 pm on March 31st, 2011

    Okay:(

  23. dearlybeloved 2:53 am on April 1st, 2011

    wow, that was a great poem, rocky.

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