my poem
September 30th, 2012 by kimmmi made this up just now, it might be lame but its what i got at the moment….
i wake up to another day knowing what’s to come
they say i’ll be ok but my heart is just too numb
the sun goes down and im crying myself to sleep
but this pain wont let me, maybe this time i cut too deep
im driving myself crazy, almost as if im going insane
maybe i am, and im the one to blame
i dont understand the reasons for my existence
i hear a voice inside my head, but it’s too far into the distance
life is a mess and very unfair
maybe soon i’ll be nothing but dust simply flying in air
would ending my life make you all happy?
well i rather be dead than feeling this crappy
i rather be gone out of this world
than continue on as this very depressing girl
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Most of it made me sad, one part made me smile. All in all I liked it, probably one of the most honest poems I’ve ever read. You may have a talent there.
Awww!! Thank you that comment of yours made me smile you give me motivation to keep on writing! I’ve realized the best time way to write is by just pouring out your emotions as your feeling it. No thinking just writing !
Very honest, very powerful, so much emotion and its real emotion not jus a string of words put together to rhyme. Its true th best time to write is in emotion and to jus write absent thought. Dont stop writing, youre really good at it and look im already you second fan:-) So keep on writing beautifully and smiling beautifully
I really appreciate those kind words of yours. Thank you so much and it means a lot. I hope you are all doing great, life’s a struggle and hard to beat /: