Never been so low, didnt know. That I could fall so far covered in scars. Caused by the drugs I use, I abuse. Shit. It wasnt written in the stars its the life I choose. Whats it to you? If I hurt myself, nobody else, self destruct. Fuck health. Aint no one got time for that…So, Ima grab another sack. Lay back and pray I never wake up. Cause I cant get my cake up, while starin in the face of, this dark hearted demon, i just feel like leaving, everything ive known everytime that Im fiendin. No sleepin no eatin, barely even human. Constant weeping labored breathin, about to start losin, my own sanity. Left alone, no home, so I roam…ughh…. but it, is not the real me. I died a long time ago. Now Im a monster in a human coat.
I know its not great. I tried to use punctuation to convey: rhythm, cadence, and tone. Dont think it helped much though. Its a rap. I usually sing, but I found this sick instrumental online and had to flow. Srry about the topic matter.
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That’s really good. Did you just come up with that?
Where is your screen name from? It sounds so familiar.
And it’s a line from my favorite movie, The Master of Disguise. 😀
Thats where I knew it from……am I not turtley enough for the….turtle club? Turtle!Turtle!
Yaaas. I never find anyone who knows the movie, or if they do they hate it. You just made my day. That movie is too funny to not know or to hate.
Ya people always hate on that movie or they dont know it. Ive been watchin it since I was a kid though and dont think I could forget it even if i wanted to.
Only the first couple lines are off the top of the head. Took about 5 or 10min to write the rest. Thank you for saying that as well. In all honesty the only reason I posted it is because I really liked it. I didnt think anyone else would though.
That’s actually really impressive. It takes me like a full day to come up with anything like this. xD