yet another shitty poem (?)

Welp here is my poem tonight (I want to share it for some reason, is longer than normal) It’s sort of two poems though that kind of fit together in a way. One of them I sort of wrote based on some things that are commonly said to me (had an experience with them today actually) and the other is I guess a response? Not a great response, nor really from me, more just wrote it from the perspective of the imaginary target of the first one…. Not sure is confusing I just wrote these took about 30 minutes which is pre long really -_-

**start**

Hey there, you fucking freak

Come near me, and I’ll make you squeak

When my fist connects with your cheek

Breaking your face the blood will leak

I hate all you fucking faggots

Go eat shit with the other maggots

Don’t let me see you again

As next time I won’t just complain

I’ll cause you pain you won’t forget

I’ll beat you down make you repent

For your sins and your actions

And your sickly attractions

Cut your hair it’s way too long

And throw out all your bras and thongs

Go and beg for forgiveness

And stop spreading your sickness

“I’m so weak and insecure”

“I’m blinded by my minister “

When you speak that’s all I hear

I’m looking around for your puppeteer

Whose hand is up this dummy’s ass?

Whoever it is they have no class

You best watch out I do have bite

I’ll stop you dead like a traffic light

You are screaming “god hates fags”

Yet you light up and take some drags

I doubt that you got that joke

Cus you are a stupid bloke

You are boring and standard

You yell at me and it’s absurd

How easily you are angered

You’re the reason I’m shattered

It wasn’t you in particular

But it was another contributor

With their insults and their stabs

But now all I hear is senseless blabs

**end**

So I would like to know how much they suck. What could I do better?