all in good time
all in good measure
all in pursuit
of the perfect endevor
the perfect endevor
the blade to the skin
the much needed feeling
of how it bites in
how it bites in
better feelings arent missed
its the incontent human’s
method of bliss
i wrote this while i was in a “treatment center” for adolocents. i was there for about a week. even after being “treated” i still feel this way. i write alot of poetry but this is by far my favorite that ive ever written.
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i like the poem and i love the word bliss i hate how its now being used for a chocolate commercial because its meaning is spiritual happiness and no chocolate can give you that
haha chocolate cant but if your me sharp shiny metal sure can
i get spiritual happines everytime I have a dish of beans with pork meat in front of me. I love beans. About beans, now that I remember. I have a friend who had some problems with the “winds” coming out of his asshole, something which was particularly annoying as he was trying to date a girlfriend. So he popped into a store and found a thing called Bean-No so as to fight off farting. When he was going to take it to the cash for payment in turned out that there was a cute young girl there, and he was horrified at the idea of putting that on the shelf for her to see it. So he tried to smuggle it in under his jumpers. The security guard caught him and they took him to a room where he said that he just could not bear to go through the cashier with his pathetic disturbance. They laughed, he paid the stuff in the room and they let him go.
No, I think that stuff never worked because he did not get that girlfriend
After graduating from Harvard in bioinformatics, I returned to France. Yesterday I applied to a post to clean WC at a school. They asked me for a cv, 1 year experience and a cover letter. They rejected my application because I did not have enough experience. Believe it.
I am REALLY liking your poem!! You are quite talented 🙂
thank you
Do you know the site deviantart.com you can publish your poetry there for all to see relate to and love. You can even look me up my name there is Fallenkitten21 I love venting there. Mind you none of my poetry is this good!