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My Beautiful #3

My love is a burden

Always weighing me down

But you shot at it

And I came to you

Looking for peace

Only to find war

You were my beautiful 

The one that I love

Flying on wings

You were my beautiful

The one that held me tight

Then the storm and darkness came

And my wings didn’t work

So you left

When I was no longer beautiful

Now I fly

Though the storm has not passed

I find strength in my anger

To fly and to soar

For a while

Before I must come back to rest

I lost the war

But so did you

Because you are no longer

My beautiful


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77evergone77 4/20/2010 - 9:26 pm

Your beautiful and so is your writing.

Gray635 4/20/2010 - 10:07 pm

Hey, I love these. Anyway we could talk? I’d love to hear your story.
I’m new to this site.. and well.. I’d just like to talk.

charlotte_intheskywithdiamonds 4/21/2010 - 9:34 am

Thank you for thinking that i am beautiful and so is my writing you should start writing again to your poems were fantastic.

Grey- My story is not nearly as tragic unlike other people on this site.I was born into a good family no pressure for grades they loved me and I loved them. When I was 7 I was diagnosed with lymes disease. It caused me to be blind for 3 years with the occasional paralyzed back and neck. Then one day i had to go on life support. There weren’t enough tanks or whatever so they took a man who they thought would die anyways off life support and gave it to me.I heard the scream and then the dead silence. This event is what made me suicidal and it made me think i didn’t deserve to live. When I was 10 the lyme went away. I am now thirteen and just last week the lyme came back. So im back on meds. Meanwhile this guy who went to my school and I had been emailing. Knew i liked him and he like me too. Then my friend (now ex-friend) came along and asked him out they are now together and I don’t contact either of them. Which is what caused me to write this poem because i love him.

Gray635 4/21/2010 - 1:21 pm

I’m so sorry. I can relate to losing someone you love to a friend. Isn’t it strange how something awful can be the inspiration for something so beautiful? I’d love to talk more. Can you email me? emokidxd635@aim.com

77evergone77 4/21/2010 - 6:02 pm

I’ve atrtedbthinking if some stuff but I never write anything down. I just got out of a giant writers block where I just couldn’t bring myself to do anything expressive. Which means writing. Music. An poetry.

I’m amazed at hiw strong you are. My was of thinking for sone reason involves random images with matching emotions or physical feelings sometimes. So I could really feel at least a fraction of your pain if only for a small second.

You are amazing!

77evergone77 4/21/2010 - 6:03 pm

Oh whoops sorry it says.* I’ve been thinking about….

charlotte_intheskywithdiamonds 4/21/2010 - 6:21 pm

Thank you i am not that amazing but words are they are magical.

77evergone77 4/21/2010 - 6:47 pm

Indeed they are…….did I just say indeed?
You are amazing. You have lasted through so much. I crumpled so easily. You are so strong!

charlotte_intheskywithdiamonds 4/21/2010 - 6:58 pm

No my life doesn’t sound nearly as bad as yours and you did say indeed!lol.

77evergone77 4/21/2010 - 7:22 pm

:D. You make me laugh and smile. That makes you awesome as well as amazing! But what part of my life is worse than being blind for 3years!!!!! Or having lymes disease. 🙁

charlotte_intheskywithdiamonds 4/21/2010 - 8:20 pm

You were ignored and your best friend died you had no one to help you get through it. X-(

Gray635 4/21/2010 - 8:47 pm

Hey, Charlotte. You’re obviously inspiration to all of these people. You help them, and me. Therefore, you can’t ever die, k? (:

77evergone77 4/21/2010 - 8:59 pm

I agree. I understand your pain. But you help so much. No wait. That makes me sound so fukin selfish. Eh. WTF who cares. I am selfish. Thts what they say right? Suicide is selfish? Haha. And there I go again. I can’t spend five minutes without reminding myself of how much I hate me.

Whatever. My life sucks. But I still don’t have Bad health. You had your love stolen by the living.

charlotte_intheskywithdiamonds 4/22/2010 - 9:00 am

True but hey ill get passed it. I havent thought about suicide for the past month and Evergone you are wonderful thats why I talk to you and I think that your poems are beautiful.And Grey ill try no to die thanks.:);)

charlotte_intheskywithdiamonds 4/22/2010 - 9:01 am

I meant 🙂 😉

Gray635 4/22/2010 - 12:34 pm

haha. good!

Gray635 4/22/2010 - 12:38 pm

share your story every chance you get. its insiprational. keep me updated on the return of your disease.

charlotte_intheskywithdiamonds 4/22/2010 - 6:25 pm

I went to the hospital yesterday and the doctor said it got worse and I’ll need a wheelchair

77evergone77 4/22/2010 - 8:19 pm

NOoo!!!! 🙁 I don’t want you in a wheelchair. You deserve to be free of your Lyme. O can’t imagine you in one. You are too string in my mind.

Gray635 4/22/2010 - 10:36 pm

Oh, I’m sorry. You’ll get through this! We’re all here for you until you get better, which WILL happen.

charlotte_intheskywithdiamonds 4/22/2010 - 11:24 pm

Yeah people wheel me every wher but I get free candy. So I will get through this.lol. 🙂

77evergone77 4/22/2010 - 11:35 pm

Haha. At least thers a plus side.

charlotte_intheskywithdiamonds 4/23/2010 - 12:34 am

Yeah I guess but it doesn’t make up for the fact that I can’t use my legs

77evergone77 4/23/2010 - 7:37 am

🙁 true.

charlotte_intheskywithdiamonds 4/23/2010 - 10:08 am

True but I’ll make it . I did before.

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