This life isn’t worth living, if you aren’t with me to share it.
That is why I try so hard..
When you hug me, it heals me..
When you kiss me, i feel alive.
I never thought I could fall in love again.
But I did, I fell in love with you.
If I die now, I will die yours forever.
I just want to be yours forever.
But I know I can never be yours forever, whilst I stay.
You will never love me the way I love you.
I am Ariel, so I will die yours forever..
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Oh romeo. Is this your first love?
Try Juliet…and no..my second love!
Haha do you show him your love?
I mean do you tell him your poems
shit. Complete shit.
JUST KIDDING. It’s sweet, i said some stuff like that back in my days.
Hey..yes I gave him my poem before I wrote it on here…I have written him countless other notes..not as depressing too.
And Syko…it hurts when you say that…I am sorry its terrible! I do mean it! But you are allowed to have your own opinion! Have a great night (:
why do u need someone to be happy and have peace? When u realise u only ever have urself u will be free..
I guess Syko was making a not so very funny joke.. ha-ha..
Anyway, I like it! I can also really relate to it, it gave me goosebumps (maybe just because I can relate)
So what was your boyfriends reaction to this poem?
Not much! He was mad! Well bc I had written it for him..and then found out he was planning to go on a date with another girl this weekend…and he was mad bc of that and it meant nothing or at least seemed that way. He took from it that I wanted to die!
So.. he is not your boyfriend anymore? (caus you say he’s going out with another girl this weekend?)
Ive read some posts youve written and I feel I can really relate to them. And I know its hard but still: If you broke up with him you shouldnt send him poems like this. He hurt you. Why would you want to give him the idea he’s the most important person in the world while he is obviously a dickhead? Of course you can write them caus thats how you feel.. but I think you should just let him ‘go’ though. Which is hard, I know from experience, but, you cannot let a dickhead ruin your life especially when you arent even together anymore.
Keep writing poems though! Its a good outlet for your emotions!
No he didn’t go out with anyone bc I caught him. He went out with me instead. And he claimed that he was only seeing a movie with her as a friend. I didn’t send him this one after we broke up. I wrote it while he was still living w/ me. I gave it to him then. On Saturday I ripped it up and threw it out bc all he got from it was that I was going to die and this poem is so much more than that. It is so much more beautiful than that.