I ask if some of you can take a minute to read something of mine. Its not special. I used to love writing. Poetry and the art of literature was my passion. Unfortunately like most of me.. it has died. I wrote something for the first time in many years tonight.. As I keep myself from wishing I could end my life.
Ugh.. fuck! I’ve always hated my birthday.
You used to be there. Holding me tight; you made me whole.
You were my love, my heart, and everything in between. Until you peered into my soul.
I asked you to stay. You told me no.
Why did I have to get high, and let you go?
Four years today and I can still hear your words..
That I’ll never change. and I tore your heart into thirds.
Now here we are, and look at has become. Who tied your noose? Who sewed your bed?
Who is here crying alone? And who was found hanging dead…?
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It’s beautiful. The poem, is really… I don’t know how to describe what I think. Talking about love and death and it seem like you feel what you’re writing. I love poetry, and this poem is very pretty.
I dont know whether to thank you or not.. its been one of those nights. Thank you though.. It holds a story.. obviously. And tonight its one I cant seem to get out of my head.
I love morbid literature and poems,
You have real talent, you should do this more often,
I really enjoyed the poem
I usually feel that kind of things. Some days there’s something inside my head and I can’t stop thinking about it, it just controls me. Did you wrote the poem recently or the story is a little old?
I wrote the poem tonight.. and the story is as it says in the poem.. four years ago today.
And thanks Rathernot. I really appreciate your kind words
I enjoy the poetry on here. Yours does tell a story, a sad one. They way you wrote it though had so much more feeling than it would have just writing what happened. I enjoyed it. Share when you have more. Is your birthday today?
Yes Jael it is my birthday. Thank you for reading.
this breaks my heart,
but it’s beautiful.
really beautiful.
i hope you’re okay michael
i hope your birthday gets a little easier every year
all my love to you today <3
Your talent shouldn’t go to waste, you need to get those poems published Michael
Thank you.. all of you.