She started in the darkness and she ended in the night
The fallen angel finally can take her final flight
The world has lost a beauty, as she was one of a kind
And even in a thousand years, another you won’t find
With future all but over, I start clinging to her past
In a world full of contradictions, she is free at last
And yet it’s not as black and white when filled with shades of grey
As she’s so missed that even the nonreligious will pray
Many times her single tears had shed from dusk until dawn
But now it is the whole world that keeps weeping as they mourn
I never would have realised forever hurts so much
Until I learnt that there will never be a final touch
It is not fair for me to smile with knowledge that she cried
And it isn’t fair for me to live knowing that she died
For I know her time on this earth was tragically stolen
But I will never forget the beauty of the fallen
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this is really pretty especially when read out loud
Thank you. I read it out loud to in front of hundreds of people who had lost someone to suicide. I also read this at a poetry slam and it made it to the state final. I’m just glad people were able to hear about her and what she inspired
I would imagine it’d do quite well. ^_^
Although in a way I kind of wished that you never wrote it, based on the title, as that’s a bit sad that that happened…. Really that’s an attempt to say that I wished that hadn’t happened…. :/
The most gifted people are usually the most broken
this reminds me of Annabel Lee by Poe
sad, unfair, missed, clinging, tragic,
if only one could freeze time forever in a moment of one’s own choosing…
I just read that poem for the first time and I love it. It brought tears to my eyes. Thank you
you’re welcome, Poe is a wonderful writer
it’s a beautiful poem, i love it too, and i read it often, it’s so very dear to my heart, for my own reasons, and have shed a tear or two too over the years reading it
and thank you for sharing yours too
Wow, that struck some chords. I feel as if I’m intruding to comment on what is quite literally the creative product of such a violently, agonizing experience ut it is truly beautiful. It doesn’t take much to make cry, I am a sensitive soul but that takes nothing from the power of this verse.
I always say you need to find beauty in the darkness, I’m glad that you found it. Thank you
Ow! Hurts!