Welp this one was quick and easy to write, maybe because I know a lot of words that sound like what I used…. Or maybe I’m just in a better state to do this…. I forgot to time myself and just started writing when I looked up about 20 minutes have passed…. So I guess this took 20 minutes, but that did include proof reading and minor tweaks to it…. but still 20 minutes isn’t bad a bit over the 15 I give myself, but that’s mostly just to get me started I can take longer…. that’s more of a minimum that I want to force myself to spend with it every day ^_^ This one is weird too -_-
Right now I’m feeling voiceless
Stumped by all of the choices
That to me are presented
To be fully represented
To be in my best interest
They taste sweet just like citrus
Sounds great, yes it does
But I hesitate just because
They are offered by a devil
He wants me to lose a level
So I know I must be careful
But I cannot be fearful
A mistake is not delightful
So I’ll think and be insightful
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Keep up the good work!
It’ll start getting weird at like day 10 I’m sure -_- if I make it to 100 then I won’t know how to feel -_-
It’s the process that matters. Gradually, you will begin to see yourself as a poet. If you tire of doing it this way, you can try to get feedback from people irl, then work on your weaknesses.
It is so cool that you are working on this.
I like how you write…
Has kind of a rap rhythm to it. 🙂
opps -_-
I like it. Kudos on finding a word to rhyme with citrus.
it’s funny that citrus is the word I found to rhyme interest -_- instead of the other way around as Citrus does seem like the harder of the two ^_^
Are you calling me a devil, Iris? I admit I would find it funny if you did.
No, this has nothing to do with you Zet zet…. And I know that you’re a demon not a devil don’t worry…. *hugs* *pats your head* ^_^