Such a cool, haunting song and you have a nice voice, too.
I’ve been alone many years and sometimes the loneliness is so intense… well, you know.
Thanks for posting this.
Loneliness is the worst! It’s dawning on me that maybe I should work on getting more IRL friends, rather than look for a romantic relationship. Because they can still provide a lot of the emotional intimacy that is so important, and it’s probably also a better basis for an eventual romantic relationship.
I hope the same for you, that you will find ways to be less lonely. Personally, I would like to live with others, like, flatmates. But that is not for everyone.
Thanks for your kind words. I’m glad you liked it. I may post it on SoundCloud someday. Or you can email me for an mp3. I use Hotmail, and my address is my username. I know this is a little late, but here are the lyrics:
Origami
I rose too fast
and now I’ve stalled –
my happiness has been
uninstalled
I’m as hapless
as it’s possible
to be
Compared to never being with a girl at all,
death seems preferable
She’s looking
at me –
I’m staring
into the wall
I fold
into
origami
From a roaring
bull
to a slithering
snake,
I’m fake –
a peacock
posing
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Great song. I assume that’s you singing. As far as death being preferable to not being with a girl…Careful what you wish for!
Thanks, yeah, it is. Lol true! Someone please take care of my goldfish!
Well, I mean you might just get ‘the girl’ of your dreams (nightmares) and then wish you’d gone with option 1.
Maybe I can combine it and get with a homicidal maniac?
Such a cool, haunting song and you have a nice voice, too.
I’ve been alone many years and sometimes the loneliness is so intense… well, you know.
Thanks for posting this.
Thank you so much, that means a lot!
Loneliness is the worst! It’s dawning on me that maybe I should work on getting more IRL friends, rather than look for a romantic relationship. Because they can still provide a lot of the emotional intimacy that is so important, and it’s probably also a better basis for an eventual romantic relationship.
I hope the same for you, that you will find ways to be less lonely. Personally, I would like to live with others, like, flatmates. But that is not for everyone.
Anyway, take care, and thanks for the feedback 🙂
I love it. Is there any other place to listen? I would love the lyrics written in front of me if it isn’t that much trouble.
Thanks for your kind words. I’m glad you liked it. I may post it on SoundCloud someday. Or you can email me for an mp3. I use Hotmail, and my address is my username. I know this is a little late, but here are the lyrics:
Origami
I rose too fast
and now I’ve stalled –
my happiness has been
uninstalled
I’m as hapless
as it’s possible
to be
Compared to never being with a girl at all,
death seems preferable
She’s looking
at me –
I’m staring
into the wall
I fold
into
origami
From a roaring
bull
to a slithering
snake,
I’m fake –
a peacock
posing