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Poems You Hate #1: The Cold Man

by The Parallel Thought

Fist sized heart’s on a window ajar/

A salted thought yet scattered afar/

But a fallen star I will carry to sea/

So long I know who I come to see/

A curse in veins to bind these trails/

So doses now higher than taller tales/

Of inner peace for my inner conflict/

Raising childish hate oh I will be strict/

To nurture my wounds for such a day/

When all the pain will finally repay/

So the shadow of eyelids in cold moon/

Will taste like death but all too soon/

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clipped-wings 5/23/2019 - 7:16 pm

I think your poem is great! I’m not able to go back and re read it but I really liked parts of it. Hopefully you have more to share?

The Parallel Thought 5/24/2019 - 5:34 am

Thank you honestly, I didn’t expect feedback. Let alone good feedback. I have quite a number and I will share regular. Thanks again.

rocketman 5/24/2019 - 5:41 pm

PRETTY GOOD! BETTER THAN I COULD! 🙂

LET ME TRY 🙂

ROSES ARE RED
VIOLETS ARE BLUE
THIS POEM STINKS
AND SO DO I ????????

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