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Garbage Venting

by shatterediris

Speaking to you made me smile

With a joy so juvenile

Each sentence would make me laugh

I would cherish every paragraph


Even though we lived so far apart

You had a tight grip upon my heart

But now that it’s time for us to depart

Is when my pain truly will start


Hello, I’m the one who’s lost their smile

It’s been gone for quite awhile

Driven off by arguments and harsh words

It’s now gone, exactly what I deserve



I couldn’t sleep last night so I wrote a thing to try to help with that…. I hate it and it sucks. Yet I feel like sharing it because I should…. I haven’t shared a shitty poem thing for awhile.


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rocketman 6/3/2019 - 8:49 pm

It’s great! The best shitty poem thing I heard in a long time!!! IT WAS PRETTY GOOD! Thanks for sharing .
Better than I could. 🙂

shatterediris 6/3/2019 - 9:16 pm

Thank you…. It still feels a bit rough, but most of my things do xD

EmptyPluto 6/3/2019 - 9:41 pm

Nice. I miss your poems.

shatterediris 6/3/2019 - 10:10 pm

I’m sorry…. I haven’t been in the mood to share them as of late 🙁

EmptyPluto 6/3/2019 - 10:17 pm

Ah, I see. Well, it’s good that you’re still writing.

Best wishes.

shatterediris 6/3/2019 - 10:38 pm

I’m writing less complete feeling things though :/
But yes I still am writing xD

some kid 6/4/2019 - 1:10 am

I like it write another one !

shatterediris 6/4/2019 - 1:28 am

I likely will…. I have posted a lot of random things here :/

rocketman 6/4/2019 - 5:29 am

Get to bed!!!!! 🙂

shatterediris 6/4/2019 - 8:11 pm

No :p -still have not slept-

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