“I trusted you” she weeped, holding her chest her knees hit the ground. Her heart stung as it shattered into pieces. She could feel each shard pierce her deeper and deeper. The blood seeping through her snowy white shirt. Staining it a crimson red. “I trusted you” she repeated before laying down in a pool of blood to take her final breath.
Honestly I feel I could have done better but I can’t quite get it today. Oh well maybe I’ll try to rewrite it with more details at a later date.
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Got that melodrama going, like it:)
its a small reflection of how ive been feeling the last little bit.
Someone broke your heart?
email. ill explain there. just in case he reads it although he will still know it was him. i should probably talk to him about it soon but hes busy right now and i dont really want to ugh
Short and really well written. Moved me, so thank you for that.