I write poems when im bored but mostly when i feel like crap.Now ineed you people to comment on my poem k? and be truthful this is serious.
IN MY HEAD
My bones are shook with grief,
I beg the feeling to retreat,
I try to chase this horrible pain,
I thought mistakes are made so knowledge you gain,
Frozen in my black abyss,
This is a feeling ill never miss,
Lost in a world forgotten,
My heart and soul has grown rotten,
I wish to fade from this horid place,
Disapear from this animal race,
Say good-bye to all my friends,
Im sorry to say this might be the end,
Im sorry ive broken so many promises,
I just hope someone has learned from this,
The darkness in my heart has reached its peak,
Sometimes i wish i wasnt so weak,
Ive tried very hard to believe,
That maybe someday i might achieve,
The age that is way beyond my prime,
But i feel guilt,as if i created a terrible crime,
Ive locked myself in my soul,
Thtas more burnt and black than simple coal,
I will repeat this once again,
Im no longer afraid,
This is the end…
      Written by:silent survivor
p.s:my email is animecat9@aol.com if any body wants to know.
5 comments
That’s good better than mine anyway
thx my mom says i can get these published somewhere but shes only seen the happy ones.thx again
Where you from
It’s really good
I like it
Caught in Fire
Wrapped in flames
Who can tell me the names
Of the people abbadon tames
Life goes black
I begin to feel slack
Could of tried harder
But i could be a Marta
Black goes to Death
My life is still waiting
My soul is still tainting
I need release
I need Forgiveness
I need power
I need love
like dove
Hiding in the night
Avoiding the hawks sight
A light makes my Soul fight
Keeping my mind right
Away from man’s blight
and the hawks might
Life is Life
and is always balanced on the end of a knife.
Ill find my own path.
Away from human life
Away from the knife
Ill make people see
Life is nothing.
But what the people see
Life is everything.
Life is mine, Life is yours