When darkness is near,
We start to hear our doubts and flaws,
We silently cry,
We want to die,
It’s clear we aren’t loved,
Abondoned by our parent’s,
Adults lie to us,
Tell us the worlds fine,
That’s a lie,
The world is full of evil and cry,
Critisized by the ones we trust,
Ostracised by people like us,
Im walking in the dark no direction,
Waiting for my ressurection,
We start feeling insecure,
You say you love us we’re not sure,
You say you want us thoughs are lies,
Lies that are crushing my insides,
We’re a disease you can’t cure,
All the lies we have to indure,
Until the day we realize,
There’s no point,no point to cry,
Just disapear inside yourself,
Invisible is how we felt,
You say your sorry,
It’s too late,
Our destiny’s calling,
We meet our fate,
Falling into the dark,
Suddenly we see a small spark,
Distant voices plead not to go,
Don’t know if they’re friend or foe,
Walking into the beautiful light,
Getting a feeling that we just might,
Be able to live in this world,
It’s to late to change our minds,
We’ve killed ourselves,
Joined our kind.
5 comments
I like it a lot, very well writen and expressive. I understand being abandoned and how suicide feels so tempting but so is life in the right way.
Wow you wrote that its really good i like it
Very good. x
Writing and poetry can be a very good way to release your inner emotions. Better out than blocking you up. It can get too much to handle if you don’t let it out. It seems, reading that, you have the ability to express your feelings in words well.
Great poem silent, very true and accurately discribes me. I like it.