Before time and light there was only the never beginning and never ending darkness, nothing was born yet everything died in the ever hungry and all consuming darkness only to be spat out as more darkness, darkness breading darkness that fed off its own darkness, ever hungry and never truly satisfied the darkness was destined to eat its own body to fuel its ever exspanding self, for the darkness was there before space and distance were concieved, making it incomprehensibly vast and infinitesimally minute, constantly growing and shrinking in complete chaos. but in its ever ravanous stomach something was brewing, bits of the darkness came together only to deatach yet reforming later, each time the bond growing stronger and stronger yet continuesly breaking and reforming waiting for that one thing, then in an instant that lasted an eternity a spark of the darkness, never before consumed by its own ravanous maw bound tightly with the ever reforming mass in the ever growing and ever regurgatating stomach of the ever shifting darkness, withing that tightly bound, loosly configured digested darkness was a small spark of conciousness that grew fully in a sudden flash that lasted both a millisecond and an eternity. it tore out of the darkness with such gentle ferocity it both tore a whole in the darkness and carressed its way free. the conciousness that grew gave itself a name, a name so powerfull it never uttered it, even to itself imidiatly forgetting it but even it could not be denied its name. the darkness watched as this being grew from inside it, hurting it, destroying it yet embracing and loving it, sharing conciousness with the darkness, because the entity that emerged wasnt like the darkness. for an eternity that never started the two beings fought and made passionate love wrestling with both intense hate and epic love. they fought and loved untill, by accident as they melded their beings the ever ravanous hunger attacked the ever full entity and out oof the wound fell its essence, as the essence fell in drops it gatherd its spark of conciounsness and became time, floatibg forever in the devide between its creator, and its liberator. sencing the entitys wounded state the darkness surged foward to regain what it believed to its right, every bit of conciousness the new entity took from it, but with time on its side the new aincient entity lashed out blindly at the darkness that was the root of all, the darkness saw the blow coming and went to move its ginormously small frame out of the way, only to find itself moving in slow motion, for time had slowed it down, while speeding up its creator, with a wild gash across its unformed face the darkness let out a soundles shout as drops of its essence too fell forever through a never ending spcae, but it still had its fathers conciousness, tired of falling it became space and distance, and so was born time and space and distance. the newly aincient entity knew with such things against it darkness would surely prevail, but regardless of that she now had her child, time, to live for so yet again she attacked with blinding light lancing through darkness renting open a hole in its essence, but darkness drew forth essence from the light as it passed and together the drops fell, melding together into something new. many many new things in fact that fell so far that their mother, the newly aincient entity felt fear for them, in great desperation she changed, and flew from the arkness to become the world, for which the newly created beings, could survive on, fearing the power such being would have, time, space and distance banded together to imprison these new entitys, making sure they could never leave their mother and become powerfull enough to rule over the original children of darkness and light. and so was born man. equal part light and darkness. yet they lived on the world made of their mother, made of light, and so the light won out in the hearts of man, but the light was weak, it had made itself vulnerable in order to protect its children for no matter its feud with the darkness the light still loved it and gave everything to protecting what their melding produced. but as she made herself the world, the beings worshiped her for saving them, and slowly he light completely dominated the darkness in the heart of man, untill the darkness was driven from man, but it returned, as all things must do once they are destroyed unto the darkness that swerled arround the light, seeking to destroy it and care for it, seeking to slate its hunger and become whole again, despite its insatiable hunger. so the darkness swereled and swirled but the hear of man was strong, untill the light began to feel its energy drain, the fight with the darkness was sapping her strenght and where once she could have lasted forever or nothing her son, jealous of her love for humanity brought down all the power of time down on her, aging her horendously, and so the light retreated, deep into its core where it waited, it waited for man to call its name, a name long forgotten because its power would bring a second coming, her name so powerfull it was stricken from man and time and space. man was left in confusion as the light no longer surrounded them, giving way to the ever ravanous darkness. when man saw darkness they huddled together, and darkness created a being by ripping a chunk from himself and casting it over man, this new being was fear, and it latched into the heart of man, and so they ran and hid from the darkness, chanting “The darkness is coming, the darkness is coming” and for a time the power of man frustrated the power of the darkness for they ran and hid so the darkness couldnt find them, forever they coward in fear, for fear never left man, remaining loyal to the darkness and never allowing man to forget that they must too return to the darkness, but man had many things from the light, they had the desire to survive, and so they hid, ever chanting “the darkness is coming, the darkness is coming” never allowing eachother to forget the danger they faced. and so they hid, and they survived, a brutal and harsh survival for eons, untill one day man found woman and procreated, but the first spawn was pure good for he was life, but his evil twin followed, and so was born to humanity the gift of life but also death, and upon this did time sieze his chance, and he gave his help to death, lifes evil twin, he gave him a time upon which he was free to attack any human once they reached a certain time in their lifes, and so was born the struggle of life and death among once imortal beings,and this is how man became mortal. thefirst parents realised what they had done and abbandoned their evil son, but they were too late as he had started to grow and he survived to seek his vengance on humanity, his parents fled with their one good son, life an brought him throughout the world, and so humanity started to grown, despite deaths attacks, often death won but humanity fought back and so was born medicine and comraderie, standing against death together humanity could hold it at bay but only for a while, and so humanity continued to fight the agents of darkness who continued to swirl arround, untill one day the darkness started to attack the land which ws once his lover, but still humanity hid, all of them, except one man, who believed, as he was the sun of life and greeat grandson of the purest light that he could stand against the darkness. the darkness took this man and breathed his essence inside him, corrupting him, and so was born a man with pure evil in his heart, who turned on his fellow man, the ancestor of murderers and rapist and every evil man. now humanity was truely scared, close to their end they turned in desperation to the wisest among them and pleaded for help in finding the being that their lore told them once protected them. the wisest of the wise seached and searched untill one stumbled upon a writing, scripture from time himself, words overheard between him and space when they set about imprisoning man, that only their creators true name could bring her back, and with that man searched for the creators name but could not find it, and so the darkness surged foward binging man to their knees, and with a desperate plea to their creator they begger for help, still to weak to do anything but survive in the core of the planet the creator stirried, and was moved with pitty, with a massive effort she broke herself apart allowing her essence to flow into man, her essence flowed to nearly every man not already corrupted by the darkness, and finally man knew her name for now she resided in their hearts and they called her, but to no avail, she had destroyed her form for their survival, no matter how much they called for her she couldnt return, but they called regardless, “HOPE” they shouted, and they shouted her name till they grew hoarse but no longer could she stirr, but she had done enought, the one thing the darkness could never overcome now resided in the heart of man, hope. and the darkness realised this so he retreated, waiting patiently for he knew everything must end, so he wates, the darkness wates for us all, knowing we will come to it eventually. but what of the children neither hope nor the darkness wanted? they were left feeling empty and alone, scattered among humanity, neither good nor bad nor wanted, and so was born depression and suicide, those who welcomed death to return them to the darkness before time gave his consent. and so became the world as it is.
Fuck you bible, i prefer my genesis.
ps. sorry for mistakes.
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shit this is longer than i thought it would be
(thats what she said)
You’re quite the writer, Procel. I’ll read the whole thing when I’m not feeling so ADD.
Haha thanks P, take your time ðŸ˜
Wow, this is really nice. i love metaphysics. another possibility is man being born out of both darkness and light, and now both trying to get possession of their son. or maybe man is itself just a medium for their fight, like ball in rugby. i loved your concept of HOPE.
@quaero thanks, i was toying with the idea of man being the foot soldiers of the darkness and the night, they fight through us if u will. Now the past is written my next post could be the future. Hmm…
Honestly..I need a couple hours to myself to read all these, which I don’t have right now! lol but ill get to it eventually
Sher if u want to waste a few hours feel free ðŸ˜
Is sb here?
Hey Procel, yeah, dang, I missed this post. I like it, you’ve got a way of telling stories. It comes off very metaphorical. To be honest, I never looked into the Biblical genesis much, so I definitely prefer your rendition. What’s cookin’, Procel, my man?
Haha flatery will get u everywhere so be careful unless u want am Irish guys at ur door ðŸ˜lol. Am not much, thinking of creating a forth part of this to go with the other three and answer any questions about an all powerful god, ur man? If only i was so lucky 😉. what about you? What’s going on with the devine sb?