She’s on the floor, bleeding out
I thought she was dead, without a doubt
My honesty is brutal, I’m a killer without care
she could go missing, and i wouldn’t tell anyone, where.
I can hang you high or cut you low
but I’ll always make sure, you know
I can be cruel, I can be stiff but if i could, i’d jump off a cliff.
I’ll suffocate you in your sleep.
I’ll wait till midnight to bury you deep.
I’ll stop your heart, so it can’t beat
and i’ll shoot you once  so you can cheat.
I’m a killer without a care
but I myself have been without air.
I have hung myself high and cut myself low
and I have told myself of what i know.
but I like the blood and I like the hate
and if you don’t watch your back, i’ll mess with your fate
I’m sick in the heart, i’m sick in the mind
so be sure, not to become too blind
Your dying wish was to only be heard
so I closed your mouth so nobody could hear a word
I’m just that cruel, but I’m just that scared
what if someone did that to me? what if someone cared?
this one is related to one of my posts,enjoy i guess
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Omg seriously this is some awesome poetry right hurr!!! The content of course is brutal, but such is life… An outstanding way to put thoughts into words, I really do like this poem, Meris.
wow really? thank you. i actually posted it just for you hahaha
Aw geez, well thank you. Yes I really mean that, I often find it hard to convey my real violent thoughts into poetry and still keep it somewhat tasteful but this here is something else… I doubt I could do anything remotely as good yours but I have the inspiration now so I’ll give it a try.
you are very welcome, my pleasure and my poetry isn’t that good to me, honestly hahaha. i’ve written over 100 poems in the 5 year span, i’ve been writing and i don’t like ANY of them 😛 …i’m sure, you’ll come up with something brilliant shep. good luck
We are our own biggest critics after all, so that’s fine. Well, I’ll be sure to dedicate it to you if/when I get around to it. Hope you have a great day! 🙂
I know it’s a bad idea, but I really wish there was a “like” button for the poetry entries. Shephard is right, this is great.
thank you 🙂 i really appreciate the positive feedback, i
I simply loved your poem
thank you 🙂
Amazing, 100000000/5 that was incredible and it almost sounds like me.