Haiku-for Thanatos
Pedantic and mardy
You go too far,Hamster-Hole
You need a swift kick
Haiku#2 for Thanatos
You said Plagiarize
Its called Active Listening
My fell assassin
Haiku#3 for Thanatos
One eye to the past
Unrequited, star fading
See you Space Cowboy
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Haiku is supposed to embrace nature without mentioning humans…
This is more like Senryu.
I suppose you perceive any correction made as pedantic, is clevername pedantic? ^
I don’t consider pointing out valid critical flaws in an argument pedantic. Active listening is just repeating what the other person says.. maybe you shouldn’t focus on the past.
I don’t remember talking to you anyway, pffffffft XD
How do you think i learned the difference?
I was trying to write what i thought was “haiku,” and decided to hit the google for some guidelines and pro-tips, and subsequently discovered that i had been embarrassing myself by misusing the term “haiku,” because i hadn’t maintained enough due diligence to understand what haiku really was… and in the process, discovered that there’s something very similar to haiku, called senryu, which is typically “human satire,” with the same form and format as haiku.
lol, I’ll bite@
RAP BATTLE Y’AAAAAAAAAALL!!!
Your brain could use a sharp stick
Your words, pathetic
and not at all ecletic
your form is fettered
see I do so much better
do you venture far
well beyond your veggie hole?
I dont remember
much about you misanthrope
off saving the world
by one veggie at a time
while I bust my rhymes
tell me how is your vagin?
lol… i would have spelled it “vagyne” xD