so scream, bleed, do what you need. say goodbye. will they mourn? will they cry? while they stumble you will fly. bye bye life bye bye sorrow. hello knife goodbye tomorrow. It’s time to part. strike your heart. and slip away. slowly fade. goodbye, good day. I fear i can’t stay…
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I like that a lot, it speaks to me in a way. Did you write that?
yeah, i came up with it just now
It paints a picture in my head, flows nicely and I relate, so I like it. I read a few of your other posts, you’re very nicely poetic you know!
thanks. i try to channel all my bad thoughts into my stories paintings and poems. It’s all i can do not to kill myself. I’m only 13 and I know that eventually things will get better…just gotta hold on a bit no matter how icy life gets.
Yeah, creative things work a little for me too. I’m sorry you’re so young to be feeling that way, waiting is a very worsening experience, but I’m sure you’ll persevere! Good luck anyway!
Very well done.
This is beautiful :'(
thanks to all…i can create more…
beautiful. I shed a tear. I love poetry and this one resonates.