You can think of you’re own title for this. This is something is wrote when I was in a bad place. Still not really out of it but maybe there’s hope now.
verse 1:
“this is a life,
but nobody cares
everbody running round like their all scared
everone is trying to be somebody
butt I’ll tell what this life feels like to me
everyday an other but they’re all seem the same,
every year is different but they all look a like
everbody talking me in to this shame
I can not choose between death or life.
because I …”
chorus:
“… got no hopes,
got no dreams,
got no fears, got no believes
don’t remeber me when I’m gone, just forget and carry on
I know I wont grow to be old, before I’m fifty I’ll be cold
six foot under down in the ground, I promise I won’t make a sound”
Just wrote the first verse and the chorus so far. Everytime I feel like shit I make a verse. The problem is I always think my next verse is shit so I never add them to the song and so it’s still not finished.
For those of you that are interested, this was written as a rap, but feel free to do with it what you want.
It feels kinda good to just get this out somewhere and you of all people know what these lyrics mean. I hope this song will help people channel their emotions and feeling into words. If anyone thinks of a verse or feels like they can make an improvement to this song, please write it down. If you feel like sharing you’re verse I’m ready to listen, if you don’t then I hope it made you feel a little better to write down you’re feelings.
– Nick
2 comments
No need to change what’s already been expressed perfectly. Thank you for sharing Nick.
Hey nick, this is awesome. For me I write poems, I seem to get inspired to write them whenever I am depressed. Writing is my outlet too