I’m just doing some creative writing for school, This is the intro, do you think it makes sense? I don’t know, I think it kinda sounds like poetry in a way, not that it matters.
She said the reason she lives is because of her children, he said he live because of his family, they said they have goals. I wonder; If I asked you ‘who do you think I’m talking about’ how many people would yo be thinking off? I bet you can think of a lot of people. That’s because we’re all the same, all of us, exactly the same. Each one of us is barely anything more than nothingness, but without all of us the only thing left would be nothingness. This is why I think we live.
So that’s all I have got so far I guess, I don’t know if it makes sense though? Any tips?
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Oooh! Fantastic opening! I bet we’re two people with the same mind. 😉
This is actually relevant to the post that I just wrote!
I’m must be high on words right now.
Thank you! So happy to hear that!
It touches on our evolutionary and biological basis for social interaction-our need for “purpose” and acceptance can be a product of that too, so you do make sense.
It can be both sad and comforting knowing that we’re in many ways intrinsically the same. I think despite causality, our response to environmental stimuli can see divergent paths, in particular when you factor in past experience/memory associations-being aware of it can also influence decision making.
When can we see part two?