I don’t remember what it’s like, not to have a scar insight.
Tell me where I went wrong in life.
I don’t remember when I didn’t cry myself to sleep at night.
The nightmares seem to follow me.
I can’t remember a time I was actually alright.
What’s wrong with me?
When did my pain become so visually seen?
The scars are showing my history.
When did my brain turned on me?
I can’t look in the mirror anymore, because i’m afraid of what I’ll see.
Tell me when everyone turned their back on me?
They can’t see the darkness inside me.
When did I start to push people away?
I’m so alone.
I don’t remember a when my skin wasn’t torn.
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And again, a pure talent at work. Red, never give up and keep writing; you got some serious skills. I bet if you pursuit a career as a writer it will make you bright future.
Very well written; truly touching.
you think so? i mean me being a writer?
Yes, you could have a future as writer for sure. Is it something that would honestly interested you, if it does, then you have some very good plans for the days ahead.
And this also probably gives and will give you a strenght to the future and for anduring till the end of the high school. Keep up the good work, you are very good at what you do. Take care and be proud. 🙂
what if i do become a writer and no one likes it?
have you even try it, dont think who will read it and who will not just do ur work sincerely, u know sth i have experience it the first step is hard to take once you take that step it will open many doors for you. Just believe in urself and do it, dont think much, thinking wont take you anywhere, or otherwise you will become like me
can i run my ideas off of you? I mean you’re a writer too, right?
I don’t see why not, you have good writing skills, it would certainly be worth studying other peoples work as well; keep up the writting; in your previous posts, one word that keeps coming up is worthless but the writing proves you’re not worthless but talented, so stay strong.
thanks
In my day, I’m pretty old, it was quite hard to be a writer, often having to use local publications to print their work however, nowadays with the advent of the internet it’s much easier to find outlets for your work, there are even sites set up for new writers to share their work, remember criticism is ok so long as it’s constructive criticism. Zombieeee is right, don’t think too hard, believe in yourself and continue to write.
okay ill try
Truly exemplary work!
kudos