Hollow eyes,….. and a broken smile…,
All that remain,……Of a once happy child
The love,… that created me,……Wasted,
On my useless,…. empty soul
No feelings inside,…….This calloused heart of mine
Holding on to,……. a dream that isn’t real
A whisper in my ear,……. the only motivation that I need
To wreak havoc on myself
With no one to blame but me,………I fall now…to my knees
I’ve lost all hope,……….I lost my faith
With my head in my hands,
I plan my escape
I’m fading fast,…… can’t you see?
The years of pain……,hiding in these eyes
There’s no time left,… to feel alive
So erase my name, ………From your lips,
Forget my face,……..And leave me behind
I’ll disappear,…Until the end of time
Break the sadness,….That consumed my life
You never knew,…………what I went through,
Just trying…. to survive,
The pain it caused,…………..To be dead inside,
So this is how…….It all goes down
Right before your eyes,…… I’ll be the saddest sight
Waking up….. a passive fear,….I’ll make you wonder why…,
How could I,…….. fall so far,
You said to me, ……….I’ll be the brightest star
But, the only thing you find,……
Hollow eyes,……. and a broken smile
6 comments
I love it..
Great, but touching.. : )
its amazing i love it too!
depressing but yet so amazing
I could never leave you behind. I don’t know you, but I hear your pain, your sense of invisibility. It is like the pain my only child must have felt before she killed herself this year, leaving me heartbroken for the rest of my life. Please, DON’T. You write beautifully, from your sorrow, I know, but your sensitivities, when you begin to heal from your silent suffering, can help to make this a more compassionate world for all. We need you here. Please get the help you deserve and join the silent army for peace and compassion that wants to change the world. You do it with your lovingkindness–but first you have to give this to yourself.
This poem, is the most moving poem that I have ever read. It is really good. You are the most talented writer I have ever . . . well not known, but read of. Yes, read of. I love this poem because of your emotions, and how it impacted the poem itself. Your emotions hit me smack in the face, because i felt this. I can relate to you. I guess we all can. We all experianced the same pain, and sorrow, and loneliness. But this pain is like a contagious disease. We cant stop it. So how can we be happy again. I know I cant. You’re poem spoke to me, that I’m not alone to feel these feelings, to feel this pain.
This is beutiful… I can relate