Is it because of the way it sounds? If so, I feel the exact same way. It feels like a childish attempt at sounding poetically broken. Anyone can do this. I also tend to dislike poetry that is outright about discussing cutting, since I think it’d be more beautiful if you turned it into some sort of metaphor of something greater than itself, but then again, I don’t think cutting is a beautiful thing at all. Poetry should at least be beautiful, though, in it’s own sense. This isn’t.
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i kind of understand how some people call this art. . . but i hate reading this stuff.
Is it because of the way it sounds? If so, I feel the exact same way. It feels like a childish attempt at sounding poetically broken. Anyone can do this. I also tend to dislike poetry that is outright about discussing cutting, since I think it’d be more beautiful if you turned it into some sort of metaphor of something greater than itself, but then again, I don’t think cutting is a beautiful thing at all. Poetry should at least be beautiful, though, in it’s own sense. This isn’t.
Yeah, this feels too much like one of those shitty Facebook poems that everyone plagiarizes. lol.
I love that song