GeneralPoetry & ArtStories of Loss 4 poem by alonelybird 5/18/2015 written by alonelybird 5/18/2015 On that day I felt okay The best in a while I could even smile But then you left And I was bereft I watched you go You didn’t even slow No explanation Just pure damnation All your hatred justified All my pain and then I cried leftokaypain 5 comments 0 Email Related posts This place… 5/8/2024 Fairy tales 5/6/2024 Vroom Vroom 5/6/2024 No follow-through 5/5/2024 lost you 5/5/2024 ..it’s only in my head 5/5/2024 What is wrong with me? 5/5/2024 Conscious During A Drug High? 5/5/2024 Scared 5/4/2024 Birthday 5/4/2024 5 comments MoonShine 5/18/2015 - 9:34 am your poems are so touching. Someday your name will be in books. By the way, which breed of bird are you? Log in to Reply alonelybird 5/18/2015 - 5:53 pm I don’t know, I just am. Maybe a lonely bird if that’s a breed 😛 Log in to Reply alonelybird 5/18/2015 - 5:53 pm What kind do you think I am? Log in to Reply MoonShine 5/19/2015 - 1:46 am hummingbird, They can fly in any direction and flap their wings very fast and are very territorial. Log in to Reply alonelybird 5/19/2015 - 2:22 am Hummingbirds are pretty cool, but I wouldn’t say I’m very territorial Log in to Reply Leave a Comment Cancel ReplyYou must be logged in to post a comment.Subscribe to comments: Don't subscribe All new comments Replies to my comments Notify me of followup comments via e-mail. You can also subscribe without commenting.
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your poems are so touching. Someday your name will be in books. By the way, which breed of bird are you?
I don’t know, I just am. Maybe a lonely bird if that’s a breed 😛
What kind do you think I am?
hummingbird, They can fly in any direction and flap their wings very fast and are very territorial.
Hummingbirds are pretty cool, but I wouldn’t say I’m very territorial