each line of perfection
it makes me shake
makes me quiver
makes me crumble
every letter
it makes me yearn
makes me need
makes me cry
it’s simply devine
this utter hurt
can I prove it?
or is it just me
undescribable
unpresentable
unpredictable
I’ve sworn an oath
to never leave.
here I will stay
under this pink blossom tree
alone.
I’ll play with the immortal leaves
but I’ll never let them go.
I think it’ll be me here.
alone.
forever.
unfortunaltly, you’re sitting
under an identical tree.
but not the same tree.
never the same tree.
never the same.
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beautiful
mleh, not my best poem but >.< my best one's probably Akai Sora. if you can read my posts from a profile or something, if not I can link you?
I read the other one. Personally I like this one more. I just really love the last part. It just reminds me that everyone feels pain. We are all under the tree. But it really is never the same. Everyone’s life and misery is unique. No one can feel the same pain as you, no matter how you try to explain it. And not just pain, but every feeling, no one can feel it the same way. It’s a pretty lonely world when you think about it.
Akai Sora is a very..personal poem, so I’m guessing no-one knows what it’s about. XD it’s alot like a code.
hm, now that I think about it it does remind me of that aswell :3 very well done Sigh xD
its okay if it’s personal. The thing with poetry, like all art, its up to the viewer to decide what it means to them personally. And all art is personal, it always means something to the artist that they can’t quite explain, but thats okay because they made it and its out there and thats all that really matters
Just wondering,.have u ever thought of submitting ur poem work somewhere?..or like finding somebody to work together, perhaps to give it a picture/painting, or music?
Do u like fame? or not?
it’s better if it’s personal :3 I don’t really like the whole
I love you
but you don’t love me
why can’t you love me?
it’s all I want
kind of poetry. too obvious for me |;