I read both Storydoc and Closet and liked them both. Especially closet. Very creepy. Very cool. I like your writing style. It has a good dark edge to it. Keep it up.
Critique time: The background. Cool image. Not cool that it’s tiled like that. Distracting and annoying while scrolling down. Consider this site’s format. Nice and simple. Easy to focus on the writing. Keep the image at the top like a single logo.
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I read both Storydoc and Closet and liked them both. Especially closet. Very creepy. Very cool. I like your writing style. It has a good dark edge to it. Keep it up.
Critique time: The background. Cool image. Not cool that it’s tiled like that. Distracting and annoying while scrolling down. Consider this site’s format. Nice and simple. Easy to focus on the writing. Keep the image at the top like a single logo.