When you’re feeling low.
Aint got someplace to go.
Never despair,
Just sit in a chair.
Try not to cry,
You don’t want to die.
LIve one more day,
Look for a way.
If it’s lonely you are,
Love might not be far.
Just try and live,
You have something to give.
Love will find you,
Whatever you do.
Never give up,
Never lose hope.
Just find a way,
A way to cope.
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Nothing personal, but what a piece of nicey-nice, new age rubbish…about as useful as “it gets better”. Well, sometimes it doesn’t. And sometimes it even gets worse.
I hope things improve for you. Everyone deserves it.
PeelaSquid, you poetry is so bad it’s good. I prefer it to the more lyrical offerings here, and this is coming from a confirmed hater of poetry. So, together with your beautiful pics of the sun rising over the sea, you have the thumbs-up from me.
Thank you. I see that you also love the ocean. Where a bouts are you located?
Nice work squid. Your poems are one of the few reasons for visiting the site. They are like a drop of water in the dessert, a candle when there’s no electricity and you’re afraid of the dark, I’d even go as far as to say they are like a glimpse of a breast in a YouTube video. Keep up the good work Squid, peoples lives depend on it.
Thanks. I wrote this to give others hope, because I was already planning death, but now that special someone has turned it around.