He’s a Rocketman, and he’s up there all alone…. But at least he’s higher than a kite 😛
*start*
Let’s look up and watch the stars
Let’s forget about our scars
Let’s hug under the moon light
Let’s be happy let’s ignite
Negative feelings just like trash
Watch them burn melt to ash
It may free our souls at last
Recover from pain that’s passed
Let’s lay down on the grass
Let’s forget let’s bypass
Sorrow and misery
Make this world glittery
If we treat others lovingly
Our world may change suddenly
Some more hugging while smiling
And pain will stop compiling
Our love will fix everything
Care for others like a sapling
Shower them with some love
Watch them grow, reaching far above
Their goals, thanks to some nurturing
Just some hugs and encouraging
Pushes them towards mastering
Their skills, it is life altering
They’ve grown to be massive trees
Strong and solid with the means
To carry on when it’s dark
Not letting things chip their bark
Hate will never fill their hearts
Their dreams are just like the stars
Out of reach and infinite
But they’ll touch them, that’s definite
*end*
I don’t like the last 4 or so lines that much, and I don’t like rhyming trees and means…. Like it does work with some creative pronunciation…. But I hope that’s happy enough for you Mr. Rocketman ^_^ That’s about as happy as I get…. And yes I know I’ve posted two poems in a row, but I promised…. And I write at least one poem every day, lately it has been more around 4 or so per day for the last week or so :/ I want to get better…. I hope you like it Mr. Rocketman.
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And I think it’s gonna be a long long time
Till touch down brings me round again to find
I’m not the man they think I am at home
Oh no, no, no, I’m a rocket man
Rocket man burning out his fuse up here alone
…. I think yours was better though 🙂
Nah I can’t even compete with Mr. John ^_^ LOL 😀
Thanks though, I’m happy you like it.
I’m always jealous of people who can write poetry. I wouldn’t know where to begin. But I’m happy to see a more upbeat one than your last 🙂
Yeah I’ve noticed that upbeat isn’t really my thing…. I kind of want to change that….
I LOVE IT!!! 🙂 GREAT JOB!!! THANK YOU FOR THINKING OF ME WHAT AN HONOR!!! 🙂 I HOPE YOU ENJOYED WRITING IT!!! Really my hat is off to you! better than i could have done!!! Remember it’s not always about happy horse shit! but you even out the scales a little bit, a little negative and little positive, i don’t know if you remember me saying “YOU ARE WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT” If it’s all negative you me and everyone else will just go down hill, we have to report when things are looking up, or down, you just found something! that made me feel better! you helped me! you made me very happy today! 🙂 does it feel good? knowing you made me smile? 🙂 you did something for me!!! 🙂 Thank you!!!
yeah it feels really nice to know that I made you smile ^_^ I’m happy that you enjoyed it…. I told you that I’d write something happy for you and I did, although I don’t know if happy is really the best word for this, hopeful is more of the tone I grab from it. I did enjoy writing it, I always enjoy writing, I’m very happy that I’ve managed to write something every day for the past while 😀
I’m very happy that you did see this 😀 it would have been so horrible had you never seen this…. But I wasn’t going to let that happen anyway ^-^
You know sometimes you miss great things 🙁 THIS TIME I DIDN’T!!! 🙂