i’m new. to the site, at least, not to being suicidal. but i like writing and i was told once i should get more people to read it, so thought maybe this would be a good place to put this?
I breathe with the beating of my heart and lose it all so easily,
something of some significance slipping through my fingers.
Farewell, goodbye, good riddance, freedom and fear follow suit;
I’m gone, I’m gone, I’m gone.
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That’s a nice poem. You seem to have a talent for writing. Welcome to SP by the way. I’m pretty new too.
Welcome! Yeah its a good place to talk, read and post. Good piece of writing btw
Hi welcome
Hello and welcome… Your writing is quite powerful. If you’d like to write a little about what’s going on… or anything else… a lot of people will listen and be supportive.