Breath fogging
the air is so cold and crisp
my red jacket
laces are wet from the dew
the brown leaves dancing
sneakers kicking
splashing the puddles
the slightest scent of the so dark asphalt
my backpack thrown so high
just missing the branches
sky slate gray
rain falling
drips from my hair just before my eyes
she is watching
under her yellow umbrella
she smiles
a walk is a journey
the moment lives as long as I
the child I was
haunting me
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DUDE! Did you write this!?! If you did, I want MORE of your poetry.
This could have so many meanings for different people..you know, like paintings that can tell you what mood youre in by the colors that you notice most?
For me, it meant that a person was going through some ups and downs with no friends while someone that he/she admires watches from the distance as just the single sight of them gives hope…That’s just what this means to ME. Amazing work, honestly. <3
Thank you.
The colors are vivid in my memory. They seemed brighter then, in childhood, they surrounded.
The world is darker now. Like the color has been drained. Stolen.
Maybe I will post some more of my poetry at some point.
I would say something but i think between you and Alicia i have nothong left to say. I suppose that’s what you call speechless.
I can see this to the reason why you wrote it and i feel exactly the same followed by my past, that will never stop haunting me.
And then i’m not joking you really do have talent. I’m very very choosy when it comes to poems, so it’s rare that i am this hooked. That is saying something.
@ Shadows
Thank you.