she’s all wrapped up tight
unwrapped she shines in the light
i hesitate at first for moment everything goes quiet
Iv found a new friend she’s so shiny and light
she knows my pain without me saying a word
she knows how to change mental pain into physical
without any words
she knows how to release tension all built up inside
She makes me bleed but she makes me feel alive at the same time
i don’t feel so numb this is kind of fun watching the blood run
but she dose leave scars that much is true
but in dark nights she really dose looks like the moon
– Ray
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thats beautiful
Thanks sports I’m not one for poetry but did manage to come up with that lil something I do try write songs as a way to express
i am a poet and that was exquisite
Thanks you very much I guess if you express what you feel the music has a soul
That was magnificent. You’re an awesome poet.
Wow that was very beautiful my friend 🙂
Thanks guys I appreciate
Okay you need to go and put the blade down an outside grate as well. March outside, drop it in the first grate you find, march back inside and have a cup of tea.
bTW awesome poem, now go drop it down a culvert.
This is very beautiful, D. I like… I like very much. No… I love it.