I should really consider stopping sucking at writing poems. But I enjoy being shit at this hobby I guess. Welp I guess I want to share this anyway, it could probably be made better with more refining I mostly wanted to just get an outline down, and will probably never fix it up I’m sure…. At least I’ve never fixed up anything I’ve told myself I would eventually. -_-
The waiter brings you to your table
It’s as perfect as the person
On the other side, tonight is fable
The candle light aids your immersion
Your beings melt together
Drip, Drip, Drip
An ice sculpture melts forever
Drip, Drip, Drip
The red velvet table cloth
Soft as your hearts at each other’s touch
The sweet scented deep flavored broth
Grows cold, like the love to which you clutch
Everything melts with enough time, leaving no traces
Drip, Drip, Drip
Out of existence that icy symbol of love phases
Drip, Drip, Drip
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Pretty good.
I wonder how many licks it takes to get to the center of an ice sculpture.
Probably as many kisses as it takes to kill a relationship :p
So in my case 0 xD
Not entirely true.
*kiss*
Well I did kill a relationship without any kisses a least….
But most relationships that I see seem like they have a few hundred before they die.
That’s because they forget to wear their poisonous chapstick.