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The Whisper
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Today is as dark and forboding as my mood,
segmented by each labored staccato breath,
elongated shadows caress the faceless hood
of the relentless messenger of death.
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Motionless, patiently standing there,
wispering “You’ve got no place to hide”.
Waiting, waiting for me to pay my fare,
for my journey to the other side.
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A Rainy Day
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The rain falls like molten drops of lead,
an endless oppressive silence in my head,
there is nothing anyone has said,
that eases my feeling of painful dread.
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A cold opaque grayness permeates the air,
my soul is lonely and saturated by despair,
all I can do is sit and stare,
death is waiting, do I dare?
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8 comments
Man you are AWESOME! 😀 Wow!
Thanx. Actually I’m just bummed at the crappy weather 🙂
Thats freakin awesome!!
Your welcome sir. Chin up. :]
You never fail to impress me with your poetry. I love it very much
Thank you very much. I will continue to post it then 🙂
I would love that, I’m going to try to sit and write a poem for here if I have the patience.
Wow. Excellent works, FTS. These 2 are really heavy, introspective & symbolic. Crappy weather will do that to ya, huh? Not to rub it in, but yesterday was a real scorcher here on the east coast. I hated it… couldn’t seem to get away from the sun. Is this the weatherman’s idea of a joke?
I think The Whisper is my new favorite poem.