ahhh…EMPTY…that is what I get…but that’s not possible…cuz you wrote it. Ever hear of the “Sounds of Silence”? Okay then I get a dichotomy…the duality of nature…but no feelings…we all know this one…surviving…but what are you feeling about it?…understand…we all do it…why does this matter to you…and I can see that it does…but how does that make you feel…why are you feeling alone and different…when what you describe is fairly universal anymore…where is your story?
Sorry if I am being hypercritical…but I assumed because you posted it…you wanted all types of feedback…and what I’m getting is raw talent…but your hiding your best stuff from us?…Anything there?
sorry this such a late reply my internet was down, @ amakua i love sounds of silence 🙂 and thank u for the feedback u werent being hypercritical at all.
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ahhh…EMPTY…that is what I get…but that’s not possible…cuz you wrote it. Ever hear of the “Sounds of Silence”? Okay then I get a dichotomy…the duality of nature…but no feelings…we all know this one…surviving…but what are you feeling about it?…understand…we all do it…why does this matter to you…and I can see that it does…but how does that make you feel…why are you feeling alone and different…when what you describe is fairly universal anymore…where is your story?
Sorry if I am being hypercritical…but I assumed because you posted it…you wanted all types of feedback…and what I’m getting is raw talent…but your hiding your best stuff from us?…Anything there?
Namaste
Amakua
sorry this such a late reply my internet was down, @ amakua i love sounds of silence 🙂 and thank u for the feedback u werent being hypercritical at all.
Where are you? Deep, deep in a dark place. No doors, no windows. A vacuum, nothingness. But you did write this entry, so there is a crack somewhere.
This forum is a good place to open that crack just a wee bit more, so we can hear your screams and your sobbing.
And maybe, just maybe, a small stream of light can enter.