Contemplated suicide today
Yet nobody cared
Contemplated taking my life away
yet nobody cared
Even stepped forward and told someone
yet nobody cared
Even took a bath to see if anyone would get worried about me and come
yet nobody cared
So I sat in the water for about an hour
yet nobody cared
I prayed for forgiveness from the almighty power
yet nobody (on earth) cared
I got the strength to get up out of the bath
yet nobody cared
And stumble out to the living room in wrath
yet nobody cared
the only person who could check on me was asleep
he didn’t care
all I could do is sit there and weep
yet nobody cared
They wouldn’t have found me until in the morning
yet nobody cared
I would’ve gone with warning
and still nobody would’ve cared
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Very strong post. I truly felt this as I was reading it. I’m new to this site as a member (I’ve been reading it forever), but I felit I just had to make a profile to be able to comment on this piece of art.
I hope you continute to use all your emotions, and frustrations, and hurting, to make more wonderful, and captivating, things to read.
Not sure if there is a private messaging feature on this site, but if there is, please feel free to message me any time; I’d love to talk to you about anything and everything!
Hey, I’m the person who wrote this, like I put in my bio I’m not going to give out my name but I don’t know if there is a private messaging thing on this site either… I just added it and that was my first post. In my bio I said I’d like to be called Kittie (which has absolutely nothing to do with my real name and I actually had to think a while to come up with it and I came up with it because I like cats lol.) I’m a female and 19. how about yourself?
You can call me Ari. I am a male and just turned 22. I gotta figure out if this site has PM or not! Haha. But it is a pleasure to meet you, Kittie.
That’s alright I’d rather talk in comments anyway.. my bf doesn’t like it when i talk to guys and I don’t like it when he talks to girls we kind of have an agreement going on but, I’m sure it doesn’t matter if it’s in the comment section of this (: plus I don’t know if I want him to know I’m on this site or not right now considering the fact that he thinks that I’m making everything worse than it is for myself. my boyfriend turned 22 in december so you all are around the same age. and it’s nice to meet you as well Ari (:
Fair enough; I totally respect that. I just wanted to be able to keep private things, private, should they come up, but it’s all good.
It’s nice that you have a boyfriend. Hopefully he cares a great deal about you.
Why do you feel like you’re making everything “worse than it is?”
18. Found this pretty powerful, as well.
If you all like this one you should read the new poem I just posted called Mirror (: thanks And I don’t feel like I’m making everything worse than it is ari he is saying that. /: and thank you greenz
also greenz i don’t know why but every time i see your name i think “green beans” and i giggle a bit XDD
I’m sure you’re doing all that you can. Don’t let him make you feel like anything less than you feel about yourself.
Be strong darlin’ !
thank you… if it’s not too much please read my post “Mirror” I wrote that poem by myself on the spot just now as I was posting it.