Sorry I know it’s bad but people asked me to post it so….
I have other poems too if you want to hear them. Thanks for helping me so far.
I’m down under ground
nobody can see
they don’t notice
my true identity
I’ve been buried alive
can’t come up from under
I’m seen as lightning
but really I’m thunder
My rage is trapped
down under with me
and under ground
is where it should be
If I come up
I’ll never be the same
when I’m looked at
you’ll only see pain
I like it down here
it’s calm and quiet
above it’s loud
and a disturbing riot
If I let go
and never come back
maybe I’ll find the identity
I still sadly lack
It would put a stop
to all my problems
and I won’t have to worry
about all my solemns
I could be free
not buried alive
and maybe just then
I’ll begin to thrive.
5 comments
Powerful words. You write well. Poetry is a good way to release some of your emotions. Letting it build up hurts. It seems like you’re going through a lot of pain right now. Don’t give up. Keep sharing your poetry and thoughts with others.
Thanks! I’ll post again tomorrow.
I like this, you’re not bad at poetry. Like distant said, I feel like poetry is something that helps with emotions. At least for me, poetry usually comes when I’m feeling rather upset.
Keep it up (:
thanks guys
Ya, really nice. Thanks