(Assignment from one of my classes. I had five minutes to write this so it’s not my best)
I’ll never write about your
fastened locket, feather locks
hair up high and floral tops
silky skin and warm embrace
your voice your laugh your fucking face
your hands and how they’d fit with mine
your telling tales and wasted time
the tethered rope, your naked neck
I said I’d never write,
and yet-
3 comments
This is actually really good. Perfect meter/rhythm, perfect rhyme, perfectly consistent tone. And only five minutes? I love it. Good work! 🙂
Fantastic!
This is really good. Idk much about meter and rhyme, but it is a real good read.