I love the rain…
because it soothes my skin
it cleans my slate
it cleans within
my love and hate
because it cleanses my youth
and brings me life
it tells the truth
and renews my strive
but… most of all
it hides my fears
and helps me stand tall
and hides my tears
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I love the sun
Because when I feel cold
He warmly hugs me
Even if I can’t rhyme
I’m sorry I’m not a poet like you and it’s not even my mother language 😀
I envy you guys. I will give anything to feel the touch of rain and sun and the beauty of nature again. Its a beautiful poem, best ive read in a long time
Thank you, and why can’t you feel it?
I love the rain too. Thankfully where I live it rains pretty much half the time and gives me a nice relief from stresses of life.
Its like theres an inpenetrable wall surrounding the soul. Nothing can get through. Id be looking at the sky or the ocean or in a forest but im separate from them. Nothing touches inside. This hurts so much! Nature used to be a big part of my life n now its being taken away. My soul is dead. But your poem did touch me though so i guess its not totally dead. Thanks! 😉