My Song

So, here are the lyrics to my song, as promised. I call it “Something from the Nothing”

8 years old, she’s beautiful
Loving life and all its flaws
But she doesn’t understand the pain to come
And now it has begun

*Chorus*
Little girl, close your eyes
Don’t give into the lies
You are so beautiful
Can’t you see?
See everything you can be,
And everything you’ve become
You can still turn it all around
I know you’ll make it somehow;
Just hold onto something from the nothing in your heart

12 years old, nothing to live for
She’s given up on life
Wants to leave this world
She’s lost in a sea of lonely
Drowning, drifting to the depths
She wants to be saved, but she won’t trust
No, not anyone

*Chorus again*
Little girl, close your eyes
Don’t give into the lies
You are so beautiful
Can’t you see?
See everything you can be,
And everything you’ve become
You can still turn it all around
I know you’ll make it somehow
Just hold onto something from the nothing in your heart…

*instrumental period*

Why can’t you see?
(Why can’t you see?)

See the girl you used to be!
(See the girl you used to be!)

Why can’t you love?
(Why can’t you love?)

Just open you heart,
Let love flow in,
And feel the healing begin

Oh, feel the healing begin

*short instrumental period*

13 years old, she sees the light
God has helped her through her plight
She feels the love all around her

*Chorus again, soft*
*Chorus repeated, louder*

Little girl, open your eyes
Feel the love flow past the lies
And know that everything will be okay,
Just hold onto something from the nothing in your heart

So, that’s my song. What do you think about it?