I wrote this poem today, it sucks, but I haven’t written anything in weeks, so…
“I remember
When you looked at me
With those eyes
When I couldn’t help but
Idolize
When my heart began
To race.
And I remember
When I saw you
When your eyes
Had lost all light
When you stopped
Fighting the fight
When you lost yourself
And me
And now you’re gone
and I’m waiting
Waiting for you to come
back
Waiting to see those
eyes
Waiting to know if you’re
alive
Please come back
Please wake up
You’re still there
Lost, to be found
And I’m waiting
For you to come back.â€
This was partially influenced by Wearing Thin and Eons (two of my favourite bands), and although it was written about a junkie who probably doesn’t know me, I feel like it could be applied to a lot of different things…
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Thanks for letting me use your lyrics. “Once More, A Horror Story” kinda fits an old riff I had laying around. I started kicking it around the other night, I should have a rough take recorded in a couple of days. Would you want me to send it to ya when I’m finished?
Oh Btw, you have some serious writing talent, like I said, it reminds me of two of my favorite bands the sex pistols and Manson
I like both of those bands c: And yeah, you could email it to me at miss.blythe.1@gmail.com