The wind bit and pulled at her skin, tearing through her jacket and into her bones. But she was already cold. No, not from the weather- her soul was cold. And tired. Oh so fucking tired. She felt the chill in her heart and figured wandering about outside would chill her body to match. Dusk had settled on the hills, the light dimming rapidly as the northern wind snapped its icy jaws on her now-red cheeks. As her heart cracked, she stumbled, tears rolling down her face. But she couldn’t feel them. See, she was numb. Inside, and out. The earth was wet, but she didn’t mind. Crumbling to the ground, she tucked her long legs under her chin and awaited the show.
Dark had fallen, taking with it the brightness that autumn brings. Her ocean-blue eyes fixated upon the sky, awaiting the pockets of light. Even in the darkness, the stars always shone through. As she watched her twinkling friends erupt one by one back into the inky sky, a smile touched her wind-chapped lips. When she star gazed, she felt as though she was one of them, hovering above the Earth as a beacon of hope for her loved ones to always look up to. That’s all she’s ever wanted. To bring hope and light back into the world, into a world that seems to lack it everywhere you look.
So it was then she decided to take a piece from the stars and tuck it inside herself. This way, no matter how dark she became, how lost in her mind she was, there would always be a light to come back to.
8 comments
I really really liked this one TaDB.
Beautiful.
You bring plenty of hope and light here.
Awful and sad, and not something you should have had to feel,
but it was described beautifully..
And it was hopeful at the end.
I’m having a problem with sticking my foot in my mouth today.
X you beautiful soul. I’m glad you enjoyed this one… its darker than my other one so I was a tad worried tbh, but I’m glad you liked it 🙂 I’m hoping that you all will be able to relate to not only feeling lost, but feeling that there is always a star in sight.
Beautifully written, TaDB. Now I need to read part one.
Thanks love 🙂
This was really beautiful. And very inspiring. You should continue writing stories like this. I had dreamt of becoming a writer before, but I never had the guts to write anything, I guess its the fear of being not good enough.
Keep it up!
You should go for it. I bet you would surprise yourself with the beauty you can write 🙂 And thank you so much- I’m very glad you enjoyed it 🙂
beautiful.