That’s my new naming convention I hope that it’s okay. I guess this one’s about bed? O.o No idea it’s 12 lines which seems like an odd length, even though it’s even *rim shot* -_- *feels super lame* I really like the first 4 lines in it, I am certain I will probably use those somewhere…. -_- Thanks for reading it if you do.
Nighty nights, go to bed
Make sure that the demon’s fed
Keep dark thoughts from your head
While you lay awake in bed
Fear the monsters in the dark
They smell your blood like a shark
They’ll be sure to leave their mark
When your room and mind is dark
They’ll tear out your beating heart
Eat it, start excreting parts
Onto the wall making abstract art
All with your beating heart
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I especially like the last four lines. I had so much admiration for people who can create with verse and not just write it but articulate the pattern or sequence. I used to think I could do it but I was very young then. I read your other poem too, I prefer that one but they are both good and you should not discourage yourself(in relation to comments on other post) I wish I could write and play music but my brain is just not up to it. I’m creative in other ways like drawing and crafts. Sorry for popping up out of nowhere..
I wish I could draw well, I can kind of draw, but it’s not something I’m really willing to work on enough to become decent at it, as it’s doesn’t feel good enough consistently enough for me to want to…. But visual arts are really cool ^_^
I’m not sure which other post you’re speaking of I have a lot of them up really -_- which is surprising to me :/ but thanks for the kind words ^_^
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This would make a nice lullaby. I’m sleepy now. Thanks a lot Iris!
yeah I kind of realized that when I was 4 lines in -_- then I just decided to try to go with it
You should write nursery rhymes. You could make new fairy tales to scare today’s generation of kids.
^_^ super morbid scary nursery rhymes, just like the classics ^_^
Good stuff, keep plugging away!
-plugs away- ^_^
Oooo… do a rap version.
I don’t want to record a thing -_-
Finally I was able to sit down and read it and gotta say not bad my favorite one was “make sure that the demons fed” still towards the end it got more creative thanks for keeping it going
I apologize for the misunderstanding the ‘other post’ afore mentioned was actually someone else ‘s but for some reason thought it was yours *smacks forehead* Also how on earth it has taken me until just a moment ago to notice that your profile pic is Espeon?! Gah, deary me slowww.. Have you played Sun or Moon by the way? I bought Moon, couldn’t put it down so I was done in 2 days think I will have to stop with that one though as its getting a bit ridiculous really Pokémon isn’t the same any more- apart from it’s gameplay that is! X