I’ve started writing poetry about how i feel from day to day, I would like it if i could get some advice on what i wrote
Thanks
Beauty,
It is so lovely
The deeper we sink into depression
It sooner blossoms in our fears and our desperation
It tears our hearts and makes them bleed
But it is a new start, a new beginning
No matter how deep the pain flows
In the deepest veins it courses
It travels, It spreads
Yet still, is the light in our dark and gloomy life
Every life is sad and lonely
the people who learn to accept it live happier
Live longer
Live better
Life is acceptance
And accepting that the beauty is ever fading
Makes beauty ever lovely
also ignore the accidental pun in the title
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Last week if you asked me
I would have run into your arms
But the sun just then told me
You didn’t see the sweet yellow
Petals that my heart grew for you
Yesterday I looked at the blue
Ocean that I thought were your
Eyes but the green from the grass
In my back yard reminded me
Your hand is never at my cheek
This morning a sigh woke me
It wasn’t you, but that little
Green parrot that visits at my
Window and collects sunflower
Seeds from my broken porcelain.
This was a great read. I’d love to read more sometime.