As I sit in lonely silence
I realize my violence
I look to see my scars
And I wish upon the stars
For something simply brighter
Than trying to be a fighter
I’ve never felt so tired
It was you that I admired
You left me in the dust
When I thought that I could trust
All you said were lies
So I gave them a disguise
My immature mind
Made me think that you were kind
I would make this the end
But I feel I should defend
All the things you said
Didn’t want me to be dead
I know I love you so
And I know that I should go
It all began with “hi”
But I still won’t say “goodbye”
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Lonely rose, please continue writing poems. They are beautiful. Even though they can be dark to extents. But thats what makes some pomes beautiful as well. It’s like viewing a piece of you. From the reader perspective. Hang in there!
Thank you!
How are you doing tonight? In this moment?
I was doing fine just catching a cold currently :/
Your poems are beautiful. Keep writing.
Thank you!
That was gorgeous especially the ” it all began with ‘hi’ but i still wont say goodbye”
That’s my favorite part too! 🙂