Now its over. This is the end. Everything that you have done to me has led to this. My wrist now bears a vertical cut along the vein from which there is no coming back from. A bloodied knife lays on the floor. Blood gushes from my wound. My vision gets blurry. I write on the wall with my blood the word, WHY? The only note I leave is to whoever finds my body. I tell them to let Her know what I did and that I will always love her. Time is running out. The moment that I have longed for is near. I am now dying. Now I lay down to die. Now I finally get to leave this world. Everything goes dark. All that is left is blood on the walls, blood on the knife, blood on the floor. My body lays in the puddle of blood. Lifeless. Nobody comes to my funeral except my family who I care not about. I didnt expect anyone else to come. If nobody spent time with me when I was living why would they do it when im dead? At least its over. The pain of life is gone.
-End
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I actually really like that. I like the image that’s created in my mind when I read it.
Wait… Are you actually gone
@dyingmoon, thank you. Good to know people like my stuff
@broken. No, I just made it up. Its like a poem or something.
sad. i want things to be better.
O okay I was like what no. I just started to want to get to know you! In that case I really like this!
@lostwithin, what do u mean better?
@broken. Why would u want to get to know ME?? And thanks!! Why do u like it?
Cause I really like what you write. Obviously the realism in it since totally believed it.
Well thanks. And sorry i didnt mean to fool you
Haha it’s ok plus I’m kinda out of it so I wasnt thinking when I read and was like wait whatt hah
Haha alrite
this is really cool. I wish that was me right now
Thanks and so do i
Hi kiddo/teen. LiveNoLonger, the reason why I asked your age was because I was only curious. Don’t worry about it. I’m just another suicidal person on this site.
Also, I liked this even though it made me think that you were committing suicide. It’s very dark. But the thought/reason for that “fictional” suicide puts me off. No offense, people are different.
Kiddo??? Really? It was just like venting my feelings. I didnt mean to make anyone think that. How does it put u off? And sorry:/
Wow I really like this. I’m debating on a method and this makes me want to slit my wrists. I’m a cutter already but was thinking of using an exit bag before. Now this makes me want to remain true to who I have always been. I know, morbid, but I’ve made my decision…. So when I say this makes me want to slit my wrists, I mean it as a compliment!! Thanks!!
Thanks! Whats an exit bag? And your welcome!!
A plastic bag with a helium hose attached. The bag goes over your head and feeds you helium slowly so you pass out and eventually you die.
@LiveNoLonger – C’mon, remember what you said about the age differences that makes you think someone who is younger than you as kids? Haha, sorry, teenager with an adult’s mind. Better? :]
It puts me off to think that someone would actually kill themselves over someone who hurt them and they still love them. But you already know that I have no personal experiance with any of that. So I tend to be unsympathetic regarding situations like these.
@jumper731 what about the chance that after u pass out, u wake up later with brain damage or something??
@umbra_artist, ok then. So u said that cuz u didnt understand and didnt have any experience rite? Or is it something different?
@LiveNoLonger – I explained it didn’t I? I don’t believe in love. Nothing else. Btw keep writing, it may not be my topic of choice but you write it well. Brilliant.
Well you have a sealed bag around your head so you’re eventually going to run out of oxygen. The helium makes you pass out so you don’t feel anything and can pretty much just drift off. I guess the possibility of the bag coming off is there but they sell kits and they are used for euthanasia patients…. So it’s almost a for sure thing.
@umbra_artist, ok. And thank you.
@jumper731, oh ok. So is that what ur gonna do?